Tyrus Munroe

[plonks]

_{i n t r o d u c i n g . . .}

Tyrus Gwendaline Munroe ///

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Full Name~ Tyrus Gwendaline Munroe
Gender~ Female
Age~ 36
Birthdate~ 8/9
Location~ Miami
Faction~ The Collective
Celebrity Claim~ Kathryn Morris
Play anyone else?~ Nope

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_{m i n d . . .}

what's in my head?

/// SPECIAL ABILITY

Osteokinesis

Osteokinesis is the ability to mentally manipulate bones. With this Tyrus is able to grow her own bones or even shorten to them to the extent that her own flesh can still fit around her flexibily. Tyrus is also able to change the density of her bones making them as light as a feather or as heavy as a ton of bricks. Tyrus is also able to create new bones so as she can protect herself even more. With enough focus Tyrus is able to make the bones portrude through her own skin and fire the bones and pull them out so as she can throw them like perfectly trained daggers. During this she is able to sculpt her preexisting bones into something out of shape. Also due to this power her bones heal much , much faster than the average humans. Her powers also have an effect on her enemies as she is able to break the bones through mental focus and skin contact as if they were twigs. Lastly she can change the flexibility of her own bones making her twist her bones more easily

Limited Regeneration

Tyrus also has a limited form of regeneration that is able to heal her wounds whether they be internal or external which is mainly used when she does make the bones protrude through her skin. It is also one of the reasons her bones heal much faster than ordinary. The flesh around the openning of her wounds heals very quickly compared to normal humans and there are no scabs or indications that there was any damage their after it has healed. The amount of platlets in her system is more than trebled the amount of a normal humans which explains why the wound covers up so quickly. The platelets also heal the wounds faster. The boes that pretect her organs also have a high count of white blood cells meaning she is able to heal from illness much much quicker. She also has a massive rate of stem cells within her own body meaning that they can quickly heal any wound by adapting to the type of cell that is needed, this also allows her not to age as rapidly as other people.
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/// ABILITY LIMITS

Osteokinesis

Tyrus relies on a lot of protien and calcium so she has enough energy for her power to work. As aforementioned her bones can only stretch so far and she cannot grow farther if she breaks her tendons which connect the muscle tissue to bone. Also her Ligiments, which connect the bones, often rip due to the amount of stress that is put upon them. If her bones are not dense then they have a higher rate of breaking and causing her harm, whilst if they become too dense then she is unable to lift her body as her muscles can only lift the same amount as they previouslly could. Her bone protrusion skills are still fairly limited and she is still learning how to master it without causing herself too much pain. In order to break others bones she has to get close enough to have skin contact with them.

Limited Regeneration

There is one spot on her that will not heal and shut everything else down which as at the top of her own spinal chord. Due to the fact that the flesh wounds heal quickly then it is very hard to hide her ability if she just got hurt badly. Surgery is a risk for her as she closes up herself again very quickly. The amount of platelets in her own system can clog her arteries sometimes, inducing constant heart worries. If her brain were to be blown up or disappear then she would cease to function and the ability would be rendered useless. If the whole of her is killed at one time then she can be killed.
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/// PERSONALITY


Tyrus is very tomboyish in nature in that she will always try to act like on of the boys even when they don't want her there. Her own passion for being a tomboy is that she does not want to serve as a wimp to the rest of the girl nature and feels this is the only way of living up to her true potential. She will always look for a fight when she feels there is need one and even when she is getting beaten up she will still put up quite a fight back. She is often seen as being the dominant one in any relationship due to the intimidating presence that she gives up when she walks into a room.

Tyrus does not trust anyone and even when people put their trust into her she will always find some way to abuse it because for her it's fun to watch the relationships around her crumble. People would often see her as a fire starter or a drama queen due to the fact that she can make mountains out of molehills.

Despit all of this Tyrus is very lonely and broken inside and longs for accompaniment with her peers. She often finds that her troubles melt away at the bottom of a beer bottle and so is a constant drinker. Whilst drunk, she becomes more viscious and manipulative. She will not take no for an answer to anything and will always try to prove that she is always right, even when it is clear she is wrong
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Likes~

• Beer
  
• Sports Cars
  
• Cigarettes
  
• Her powers
  
• Starting fights
  

Dislikes~

• Not being right
  
• Not getting her own way
  
• Cheap liquor
  
• Being reminded shes a girl
  
• Being treated like a girl
  

Strengths~

• She can be intelligent when she needs to be
  
• Because of her military background she is very strict about her own life and lives it by some sort of routine
  
• Tyrus is very persistent and will not stop till she gets her own way
  
• Can hold her own in a drinking match
  
• Is not afraid to get her hands dirty
  

Weaknesses~

• Is too reliant on alchohol to get her through the day
  
• Has anger management issues
  
• Is mentally disturbed due too things she has seen
  
• Takes things to far sometimes
  
• Makes rash decisions
  

Skills~

• Firearms training
  
• Trained in street brawls
  
• Knowledge of the human skelatal structure
  
• Freerunner
  
• Great penmanship
  

Hobbies~

• Getting in fights
  
• Getting drunk
  
• Driving
  

Habits~

• Biting her own nails
  
• Singing along with songs on the radio that she knows
  
• Taking her anger out on a punching bag
  

Flaws~

• Has Anger management issues
  
• Is allergic to beestings and shellfish
  
• Tyrus is scared of what her family will think of her
  

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_{b o d y . . .}

caught in your sights . . .

Age~ 36
Celebrity Claim~ Kathryn Morris
Sexual Preference~ Lesbian (But likes to lead the guys on)
Ethnicity~ Irish-American
Hair~ Blonde and worn down
Eyes~ Blue

/// APPEARANCE


Tyrus is described as a petite frame thanks to her athletic lifestyle. She stands in at 5'9'' and weighs about 120 lbs and is proud of her height in accordance to her weight. Her legs are long and slender along with her arms.

Tyrus has bleached blonde hair which often has different colours depending on the type of light that is out around her. It is often cut short and tied back into a pony tail because she thinks she looks better with it back. She has a fringe which seems to end just before where her eyes start. Her eyebrows are often thin and are dark brown in colour. Her eyes aare an electric blue and her eyes often have bags under them from long nights and are bloodshot due to the excessive amount of alchohol she drinks.

Tyrus often wears a suit out just to show herself of to the world, as if to put herself on display for the world to see her as she truly is. Under the suit she will often wear a blue blouse with the first two buttons undone to make herself look and feel more attractive

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_{s p i r i t . . .}

this is where i come from . . .

Faction~ The Collective
Birthplace~ Miami, Florida
Mother~ Aronnete Munroe: 54, Gynacologist, Empathic Modulation
Father~ Darren Munroe: 58, Plumber, Dermakinesis
Siblings~ None
Spouse~ None
Children~ None
Other Family~ None

/// HISTORY


Tyrus was born to an Irish enthusiast family who believed in family and moral values. Her lifestyle there was based on the Catholic religion and she began to resent her parents and their lifestyle. By the age of 10 she had already showed that she was becoming a hell raiser after blowing up her schools chemistry lab with a perfectly placement of chemicals. After a while her parents realised they could not control their daughter who was heading down a downward spiral to nowhere.

Realising they had no other choice they sent their daughter to military school where she was surrounded by guys. This is where she developed her tomboyish nature after wanting to fit in with them so much. Military school is also where she learned how to fire a gun. Her fascination with the fighting and rowdy lifestyle that was the boys grew and grew. Due to the fact that she was stuck on with a bunch of boy's who couldn't stop thinking about girls her sexuality shifted. Her wanting to be one of the boy's so badly morphed her into a sexuality lock.

Realising that she did not want to be reminded of her home she enlisted in the army at the age of 18. She wished to stay away from home due to the fact that she did not want to see her parents again who would not approve of her new lifestyle of rough-housing and gun toting. She became part of the Army and never looked back on her own lifestyle. Whilst in her service she met a girl by the name of Riley Poole.

She shared her sexuality and had a smiliar background to herself, coming from a broken family. She embarked on a relationship with this young cadet. She was killed in action and it was only afterwards that a fellow cadet said that she was cheating on her with another guy. Feeling betrayed she bacame more cyniacal and more destructive.

Over the years she spent many times in different countries learning new things about life. At the age of 22 due to a leg injury she read up on the human anatomy of bones due to the fact that she became interested with how a silly injury could lead to her being barely able to walk. She spent many years there and only came up against her match when at the age of 30 she was brought in to fight the war in Iraq. Her platoon soon only consisted of herself after the rest of them died in a freak mine accident. From there on out she was constantly haunted by the memories of the faces of her colleagues who died in the accident.

Wanting to take her pain away she took up drinking and smoking trying to numb her pain. Soon afterwards she was dropped by the army for having severe depression. She knew of her families history with abilities and decided to embrace it hoping it could bring her happiness.

By the age of 32 she had recovered a little from her horrible memories and took to the streets by storm. She tried to fill the gaps in her life with sports cars and guns. Soon she took up drag racing as a release feeling the high speed engine drilled out her memories. She also took up free running for the same reason, as a release from her actual life

Over the past week she has started to notice that something within her is changing.


/// ANYTHING ELSE?


Works as as a Bartender at "The Seventh Clover"



_{c r e d e n t i a l s . . .}

what do you bring to the party ?

/// PLAYER INFORMATION

Name or Alias~ Plonker
CBox Name~ Plonker 247
Contact Info~ PM me
Age~ 17
Years of RP Experience~ 3 or 4
How Did You Find Us? Through Afilliations

/// SAMPLE RP

A broken battle shattered on the floor seemed to reflect the natural sunlight through Tyrus' appartment. It wasn't even noon yet but the bottles had already been opened by an alchoholic who refused to turn herself in. So what if she had a few beers, it wasn't as if she was breast feeding or nothing. Tyrone sat with a blouse on with her favorite pair of jeans trying to clear the couch of discarded pizza boxes and other things that seemed to inhabit it just through the untidyness of Tyrus.

Tyrus just took a swig of her beer before collapsing onto her springy couch which had seen better days. The TV which she now looked in was cracked at the top left corner but it still worked, hence the reason it wasn't thrown out sooner. The TV looked like a 40's version of a microwave and in truth It probably had the same dimmensions as one. The actual thing took up her broad dressing board, but still she didn't care, she just looked at her reflection and stared. As she turned it on the static drummed within her ear making her wince a little bit before returning to a composure she was good with.

After several minutes of silence and staring at the flicker of staticc on her screen she statred to channel surf, not staying on the same channel for more than several seconds leaving her with small tidbits of information from each channel. As soon as she reached something she was comfortable watching she rest down on her mouldt couch filled with who knows what. There she fell asleep in front of the TV letting the blissful croakings of a pot bellied toad take her away.

Soon she awoke with uncomfort realising something didn't feel right. Like a strange new sensation with her hand. As she looked down to her horror she felt a bone portruding her small fingers. The elegance of them had disappeared as she bone was tiny, sharp, almost claw like in nature. This wasn't the first timne something like this happened. Whats happening to me she thought as she pulled the small protrusion out and lay it on the table as if to investigate it. Something was clearly wrong with her

Did you read the rules: The rules? My dog ate them. Honest.

[Drew Davis]

Heya, I'm Banalitybob and I'll be your reviewer today. Please feel free to hit me up with questions, complaints, and funny anecdotes.

So let's start.

I would suggest picking a faction, but you don't have to. I will say that being in a faction can make it easier to find RP though. The choice is totally up to you, but I would possibly suggest either Taft & Harkinson or the Collective.

Power/Limits
Osteokinesis
How does firing her bones like a crossbow work biologically? Everything else looks fine with Osteokinesis, but this seems a bit...too far fetched. I'll need a good biological reason for bones to shoot at crossbow like speeds for you to keep this aspect of the ability. Perhaps she can just simply pull them out and throw them like knives a la Marrow from X-Men...

Limited Regeneration
So...this only heals skin/muscle wounds, right? If so, this really doesn't make much sense unless she has Dermakinesis (control of skin and hair and stuff) instead of Limited Regeneration. Regeneration implies that the whole body could benefit from regenerating. However, I've talked to the other reviewers and we're cool with allowing you to have Osteokinesis and full blown Regeneration if you can tie them together well.

If you have questions about this and/or want to find a new technical method to basically describe what you want her to do (which is a cool idea, btw), feel free to talk to me about it. I enjoy explaining powers.

Personality
In the first sentence you have used “their” instead of “there.” “Their” is a possessive version of “they,” while “there” is a word that denotes location. “They're” is a contraction of “they” and “are” while I'm on the subject of homophones.

The next sentence has an extra “s” in “is.” And the next sentence has an extra “w” in “when.” The last sentence of that paragraph has an extra “m” in “dominant.”

Strengths
The first two entries are not strengths, they are skills. Also, the second one has typos.

Weaknesses
in “Takes things to far sometimes” you have used the wrong form of “too.” The one you used means “additionally.” The correct form is “too” which expresses something being excessive.

Skills
You've misspelled “skeletal.”

Flaws
The first and third of these are not flaws by our definition, and you could split the second one into two separate flaws. Flaws are: Mental conditions (ADD, Manic Depressive, etc), Allergies, Phobias, and Physical disabilities (bum knee, bad back, etc).

Appearance
Try not to describe your character as being attractive in any way. Even if you think she's hot, other people may not, so that is not a good basis for description. Try to describe more objectively.

Tyrus has bleached blonde hair which often has different colours depending on the type of light that is out around her. It is often cut short and tied back into a pony tail so as it wont get in her road.

What road does her hair get in, or is this a typo?
You also have a bit of the app lead in the bottom of your paragraph, so please delete that.

History
Catholic is capitalized since it is a specific religion. Also, you don't really specify that she joined the military, just that she went to a military school, so it is a bit surprising when she all of a sudden is 30. Also, what branch of the military did she join?

She spent many years there and only came up against her match when at the age of 30 she was brought in to fight the war against the war in Iraq

The “war against the war in Iraq” part of this sentence is confusing. Did she go to fight the war in Iraq? Or is there some counter war going on?
Miami is also capitalized.

Also, when did she learn Freerunning and Drag Racing?

In all, this section is a little short. I'd like to see two more paragraphs of the size you have now. Maybe talk about the relationships she had with her school mates and army buddies, since they obviously helped mold her into the person she is today.

Finally, all first apps must be new manifests within a few weeks of their first manifestation.

Sample RP
This needs to be about two paragraphs longer at least. Adding sensory detail definitely helps with this.

[plonks]

Erm i think i got everything sir? =D

[Drew Davis]

Umm, actually, you didn't hit all my points, but I may have been unclear.

Here goes...

I would really recommend running this through a spelling and grammar check on a typical word program.

Power
The Limited Regeneration is not okay because the concept of limited regeneration doesn't really work. You could either change this power to Dermakinesis or limited dermakinesis (which would allow her to close up her skin after pulling bones through) or full blown regeneration. If you opt for full blown regeneration, you'd need a good way to tie it together with Osteokinesis. I'd suggest looking up osteoblasts and osteoclasts on wikipedia if that is the case. Just a hint

Also, you still mention that she can shoot her bones, but do not explain how she can build up the pressure to fire a bone accurately. Additionally, how can she throw the bones like "perfectly trained daggers?" She doesn't have a knife throwing skill, and if you add one, I'll need to see a reason for her to learn it.

Personality
you've missed the word "for" in this sentence:

She will always look for a fight when she feels there is need one and even when she is getting beaten up she will still put up quite a fight back.

You should have said "there is a need for one."

Dislikes
The last two are sort of the same. Combine them and add another.

Weaknesses
you used the wrong "to" in the third and fourth entries.

Skills
You still misspelled skeletal.

Flaws
The first and third of these are still not flaws. Read my former description as to why.

Appearance
In the sentence about here eyes, you have an extra "a" in "are."

History
"Cynical" is spelled wrong.
Also, how long ago did she take up street racing and Freerunning? If it was only recently, she can't be all that good. It takes years to develop those skills sets.



Please make sure everything is finished before responding that you've done it, and please run this through a grammar and spelling checker. I will know if you didn't.