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Post by Riley Campbell on Jun 22, 2009 22:59:18 GMT -5
We seem to have missed each other in cbox, so I'll peek in and give you a little checklist. First of all, I like the cc, and I'm feelin' the flames lol. You're almost done, but here's a little list of things to finish up before you're ready to be reviewed and/or sorted. - At least half-a-page of Sample RP is required by every character. Think of it as an audition for that specific character. It doesn't have to be spectacular, but you definitely want to flex your writing muscles a bit. It should be pretty easy to come up with an rp sample of the minimum size or larger. This is typically one of the easiest parts of the application for me.
- More depth is needed in Ability and Ability limits. You can check the application walkthrough for help on answering more questions to fill this area in here.
- Appearance needs to be filled out. Two good paragraphs at least, not just her body and features, but also things such as expressions and the way she moves work here too, and definitely don't forget a paragraph on attire. So yeah, 2, maybe 3.
- You should also go into more depth within the history as well. Near the beginning of the walkthrough, it will key out the amount of info we're looking for in these paragraphical fields.
At the moment, that's all I can see to bring up.
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